1. The strengths of my partners essay are really going into detail about her story and the stuff that happened
2. I found my partner using a lot of the same words over and over so I feel as if she needs to cut some of those words out and or out in different ones to make her narrative sound better. My partner also could have included more detail about the characters and people in her story.
3. I didn’t find any literary devices in my partners story.
4. The part in her paper that really stood out to me was how she felt towards her mom and the response to her mom telling her that she was pregnant.
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